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Write a Winter Haiku & Get the Kids Writing Too! —”Snowfalls” (Haiku from MY MAINE) by Bette A. Stevens

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Enjoying another snow day at the farmstead in central Maine. This haiku is from my current work in progress—MY MAINE, Haiku Through the Seasons—a poetry collection schedule to be released early in 2019. The photo of field and forest (taken from the back patio at the farmstead) inspired me to write today’s featured haiku. “Snowfalls” is a verse from the WINTER TALES section. Wherever you are, whatever the season, I invite you to get outdoors and get inspired. Join the fun and write a seasonal haiku about what’s inspiring you. It’s easy as 1-2-3… You’ll find the definition and descriptive details of writing haiku below. If the kids are around, make it a family affair—they’ll love it!

SNOWFALLS

Silently—snowfalls

Reign over field and forest

Supremely sovereign

~Bette A. Stevens

HAIKU

noun hai·ku \ˈhī-(ˌ)kü\

  1. :  an unrhymed verse form of Japanese origin having three lines containing usually five, seven, and five syllables respectively; also :  a poem in this form usually having a seasonal reference — compare tanka

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Written

on 12/04/2018

Comments on: "Write a Winter Haiku & Get the Kids Writing Too! —”Snowfalls” (Haiku from MY MAINE) by Bette A. Stevens" (68)

  1. Dean W said:
    10/18/2021 at 5:22 am

    Goood job

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  2. mizan said:
    02/22/2020 at 12:22 am

    A lovely introduction Bette. What a beautiful write! You have touched on hearts in a cozy season. Cheers!

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  3. Wanda Luthman said:
    02/03/2019 at 4:04 pm

    Reblogged this on Wanda Luthman's Children's Books and commented:
    Another great post from Bette’s blog. Here’s something to get the kids writing.

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  4. Wanda Luthman said:
    02/03/2019 at 6:10 am

    This post would also be great to share on my blog, if you allow…

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  5. Tracy Campbell said:
    12/20/2018 at 2:29 pm

    Another beautiful poem, Bette. Keep up the great work.

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  6. cathleentownsend said:
    12/16/2018 at 4:12 pm

    This is a lovely poem, Bette–and the view of all that gorgeous white snow, stretching out in temporary perfection–well, I can see why you wrote it. Gorgeous scenery moves me, too. 🙂

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  7. macjam47 said:
    12/14/2018 at 2:20 pm

    A lovely winter haiku, Bette. I will have to get my 5-year-old granddaughter to work on one with me. She’s young, but she catches on quickly. Love and hugs, dear friend.

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  8. mommynificent said:
    12/11/2018 at 9:25 pm

    I love your haiku! Thanks for sharing this at Booknificent Thursday on Mommynificent.com!
    Tina

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  9. Jacqui Murray said:
    12/10/2018 at 10:58 am

    Delightful, Bette. Pithy and true.

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  10. Monday Post – 10th December, 2018 #Brainfluffbookblog #NotaSundayPost | Brainfluff said:
    12/10/2018 at 7:48 am

    […] Haiku & Get the Kids Writing Too – “Snowfalls” (Haiku from MY MAINE by Bette A. Stevens https://4writersandreaders.com/2018/12/04/s-writing-too-snowfalls-haiku-from-my-maine-by-bette-a-st… A lovely example of a popular verse […]

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  11. AuthorJoePerroneJr said:
    12/08/2018 at 10:29 am

    Oh, Bette, I love this one. Maybe your best. 🙂

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    • Bette A. Stevens said:
      12/08/2018 at 6:41 pm

      Thanks so much, Joe. Winters here may be long and cold, but the beauty abounds… Wsihing you a blessed and beautiful Christmas–may wonders abound in the New Year! ❤ xo

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  12. Natalie Ducey said:
    12/07/2018 at 9:40 am

    Beautiful, Bette! Such tranquillity and grace. Thanks so much for sharing. XO

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  13. Tea With Jennifer said:
    12/06/2018 at 6:45 pm

    Simple but poignant dear friend! ♥
    Blessings,
    Jennifer

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  14. Marnie said:
    12/06/2018 at 4:54 pm

    A collection of seasonal haikus will be wonderful to read, and judging by that photo you’ve had some gorgeous scenery to inspire you.

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  15. America On Coffee said:
    12/06/2018 at 4:25 pm

    A lovely introduction Bette. What a beautiful write! You have touched on hearts in a cozy season. Cheers!

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  16. DutchIl said:
    12/06/2018 at 12:42 pm

    Thanks for sharing…. a lovely picture with a lovely poem!… it is snowing here as I type this but no why near a pretty as the picture!.. 🙂
    Have a wonderful holiday and may each and every day be filled with love and happiness!..

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  17. roughwighting said:
    12/06/2018 at 10:49 am

    It’s interesting how intimidating haikus can be to some. Even my creative writing students cringe when I suggest we work on some, and yet, they’re so delightful once we urge ourselves to lose all the extra words, and just go 5-7-5. Love yours here, Bette.
    Outside my front door
    The oak stands firm and joyful
    Birds sing heartfelt thanks.

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    • Bette A. Stevens said:
      12/06/2018 at 10:17 pm

      Thanks so much for your thoughtful note and lovely haiku share, Pamela… When I was teaching (grades 4-8) haiku creations were always a favorite–telling a story in three little lines and sharing them… oh how we all love that. ❤ May your winter be filled with wonders!

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  19. sjhigbee said:
    12/05/2018 at 4:03 pm

    A lovely haiku, Bette – and children absolutely love crafting them! Thank you for sharing the idea:))

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  20. Annette Rochelle Aben said:
    12/05/2018 at 10:23 am

    Makes me fall in love with snow… ❤

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  21. -Eugenia said:
    12/05/2018 at 9:52 am

    A lovely way to welcome snowfall, Bette! Lovely haiku and photo. xo

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  22. Annika Perry said:
    12/05/2018 at 5:57 am

    Bette, my heart soars from the beauty of your haiku and photo. No wonder with such majestic landscape you feel it is ‘supremely sovereign’! Here dull grey damp rain reigns … can’t wait for frost and snow – then I’m happily outside! Wishing you a lovely second advent this weekend, my friend! ❤️

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    • Bette A. Stevens said:
      12/05/2018 at 6:22 pm

      Thanks so much for your lovely words of encouragement, Annika. ❤ There is nothing quite as magical as watching each new snowfall as it renews the landscape and freshens our perspective. Looks like we're in for a long, cold, snowy winter this year… I love snowshoeing through our woodland trails on sunny days, but so look forward to spring's renewal too. Wishing you a winter filled with wonders, dear friend. xo

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  23. Janet Givens said:
    12/04/2018 at 8:06 pm

    Fantastic. Great timing too. Thanks Bette. 5-7-5. I’m taking a stab.

    The flakes flutter down
    And our snowshoes crunch so loud
    Summer comes too soon

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    • Bette A. Stevens said:
      12/04/2018 at 9:05 pm

      Well done! Oh, how I love those snowshoe days–crunching through the wonderland of winter. 🙂 Thanks so much for stopping by and giving winter a haiku try! xo

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  24. Mae Clair said:
    12/04/2018 at 7:28 pm

    Lovely as always—and what a view you have!

    P.S….I just ordered Maine Lobster tails for New Year’s Eve. It’s been way too long since I’ve had an actual MAINE tail!

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    • Bette A. Stevens said:
      12/04/2018 at 9:03 pm

      Perfect way to welcome the New Year! I enjoyed Maine Baked Stuffed Lobster for my birthday last month…always a treat. Wishing you and yours a blessed and beautiful New Yar, Mae! ❤ Thanks so much for your lovely note. xoxoxo

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  25. Molly Stevens - Shallow Reflections said:
    12/04/2018 at 6:38 pm

    Lovely, Bette. We had so much rain the snow longer reigns in our backyard. But I have no doubt there will be more. As well as more beautiful photos and haikus from you!

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  26. D. Wallace Peach said:
    12/04/2018 at 6:28 pm

    Lovely poem, Bette, and thanks for the tips on writing with children. I think we might write some poetry this weekend. 🙂

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  27. Ultra said:
    12/04/2018 at 3:58 pm

    I like poetry. My haiku:

    Snow bow on the strings
    a white, harsh winter lady
    plays the notes sheet.

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  28. Teagan R. Geneviene said:
    12/04/2018 at 12:59 pm

    It’s so lovely, Bette. Thanks for giving us another glimpse of your book. Hugs.

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  29. D.L Finn, Author said:
    12/04/2018 at 12:02 pm

    Beautiful photo and Haiku to go with it Bette:)

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  30. Jill Weatherholt said:
    12/04/2018 at 10:49 am

    Gorgeous, Bette!

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  31. balroop2013 said:
    12/04/2018 at 10:40 am

    Beautiful choice of words Bette. Love that picture too. 🙂

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  32. robbiesinspiration said:
    12/04/2018 at 10:39 am

    A delightful haiku, Bette.

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