As summer comes to a close in Maine, autumn breezes usher in The Pine Tree State’s new season… These Fall Asters along the roadside inspired my poem “Final Performance.”
Final Performance
While asters, purple tutus donned
With velvet yellow crowns
Ballet to cricket violins,
Sway tiptoe in their gowns;
A golden orb in treetops rests
The stage a soft pale blue
And I among their audience
Too soon must say, “Adieu!”
© Bette A. Stevens, Maine author
Find more of Bette’s poetry and photography—and savor the timeless tranquility of “The Pine Tree State” in MY MAINE, Haiku through the Seasons
Comments on: "“Final Performance” A Seasonal Transitions Poem by Bette A. Stevens" (68)
This is a beautifully crafted farewell to one season and hello to a new. Glad to see it again!
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Thanks, Linda. So glad you stopped by for a visit! 🍁🍂 Have a sensational Septermber!
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It’s really an impressive and creative work. I agree to that shadowing would have been great. It is nice anyway.
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Thanks for your visit and note, Mizan. Enjoy your day!
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It flows so beautifully. I loved reading your aesthetically carved poem! Great job!🌸
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Thank you for your lovely note. ❤
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How beautiful and poignant. It is how I feel at this time of year, Bette.
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Oh, the wonders of nature… Have a blessed and beautiful day, Jacqui! ❤
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Bette, this is a lovely poem and full of delightful imagery. I love the purple tutus. Hugs, my dear friend.
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Thanks so much for your sweet note,Michelle. ❤ Wishing you and yours bountiful blessings in every season! xo
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Lovely, Bette!
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Thank you, Jennie. ❤
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You’re welcome, Bette. 🙂
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Enjoyed the poem very much. Old man winter is just around the corner.
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And after winter, spring! 🙂 Thanks so much for stopping by for a visit. May all of your seasons be sensational!
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The poem is splendid, Bette. It’s lovely to watch the ballet of blooms. Yes, we don’t want them to go too soon! ❤
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Hugs and Happy Autumn, dear Miriam! ❤
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Happy Some to you, Bette.💖
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Thank you for sharing your lovely words!!… I prefer not to say “goodbye” because “goodbye” sounds too much like “forever”… plus, my garden is merely taking a needed winter’s nap and I know we’ll meet again in the spring… 🙂
Until we meet again..
May you always be blessed
with walls for the wind,
a roof for the rain,
a warm cup of tea by the fire,
laughter to cheer you,
those you love near you,
and all that your heart might desire.
(Irish Saying)
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Thanks so much for your lovely note, Larry… Sending bountiful blessings back your way as we, like the flowers, prepare for our autumn rest and winter nap. ❤
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Bette! This is breathtaking. I’m reminded of parts of Fantasia — your poem is that lovely. Hugs on the wing.
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Ever thanks, dear Teagan! ❤ xo
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A friend of yours recommended me to your blog! such a great piece!!
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Thanks so much for your lovely note and visit!
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So beautiful this gave me shivers, Bette. Love it.
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Thanks so much, Diana… ❤ Sweatshirt time…scarves, hats and mittens soon! xo
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Lovely poem
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Thanks so much.
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Bette, a magical poem with wonderful imagery carried throughout – we are all blessed to be part of this beautiful performance by nature!😀🌺
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Thanks, dear Annika! ❤ Our blessings abound… xo
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Lovely, Bette, as always. Thanks so much for sharing, 🙂
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Thanks for your sweet note, Natalie… ❤ Blessings and love!
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Love it! Take a bow ❤
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Hugs and blessings, dear Annette…
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A lovely tribute Bette. I have some Asters in bloom too.
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Beautiful poem, Bette! And the photo is gorgeous! It doesn’t quite feel like Fall here in SC yet. But by the end of the week we should get cooler weather. It’s been in the 90s here! Blessings to you! xo
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Thanks so much, Gayl. Cooler days are in the offing for us all… Have a blessed and beautiful season! ❤ xo
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Lovely, still so hot in Ga.I love flower imagery.
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Thank you, Rebecca! ❤ Grateful for those clinging blooms that shine while leaves are dimming. xo
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“A golden orb in treetops rests…” That one line alone is true poetic expression!! Just beautiful, Bette!
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Thanks so much, Jan… ❤ Hugs & Happy Autumn! xo
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Lovely. I especially enjoyed “ballet to cricket violins.”
Having just returned from your gorgeous Pine Tree State, I could really relate to this!
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I love the upbeat ending, Bette! If not for the changing of the seasons, how could we appreciate them? 🙂
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Thanks so much, Jacquie! There’s glory in the autumn sky… ❤ Enjoy the season!
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Beautiful images and incorporation of all the senses. Divine!
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Thanks so much for your lovely note, Deborah! ❤ Blessings…
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So beautiful Bette…both the image and your words of adieu. Here, roses are still standing though winter is already knocking at he door of Fall.
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Love your goodbye to summer, Bette and picture.
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This is a lovely poem, Bette. I love the imagery and the mood it evokes 😊
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Thank you, Harmony… Have an awesome autumn! ❤
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So beautiful!
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Thank you, Bettie (sounds like me)… Autumn blessings! ❤
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This is almost as beautiful as you Bette! 😀 ❤
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Thank you for your sweet words, Deborah… Blessings and love to you and yours. ❤ xo
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Absolutely beautiful, Bette. Thank you for sharing it with us. ❤
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Thanks so much, Jill… ❤ Hugs! xo
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Lovely poem. Farewell, summer!
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Thank you, Priscilla… Summer’s sings it’s lullaby. ❤ Have a blessed and beautiful autumn! xo
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Most beautiful, Bette. You’re an excellent wordsmith.
Have a fabulous day, my friend. ♥
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Thanks so much for your lovely note, dear Sandee! ❤ Blessings and love…
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So lovely, Bette! ♥
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Thanks so much, Billy Ray… ❤
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A delightful poem, Bette. I love the change of seasons, spring and autumn. They are both so colourful.
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I’m with you, Robbie… After autumn, winter; after winter, spring… Oh, the glory of it all! ❤
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You are fortunate to have such distinct seasons, Bette. Ours sort of all merge into 9 months of summer and 3 months of cooler weather. Hardly winter by your standards.
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Beautiful poem, Bette.
“A golden orb in treetops rests” What an imagine.
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Thanks so much… ❤
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My pleasure 💕
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