A writer inspired by nature and human nature


Pixabay image by Marianne Sopala

So Long Sweet Dreams

Haiku by Bette A. Stevens

Beast of a blizzard

Tromping in to surprise us

Sweet dreams disrupted

“During February and March, I’ll be getting my first poetry collection—MY MAINE, Haiku through the Seasons—ready for publication. I invite you to take a peek at a sampling of haiku from the Winter Tales chapter. I’m looking for a few ARC reader/reviewers for pre-publication blurbs by month’s end. You can let me know in the comments section below. Thanks so much for your continued support”

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Comments on: "February Writing Prompt from Diana Peach" (68)

  1. Lovely Haiku! Some beasts pass by…spring awaits at the sidewalk!
    Thanks for sharing Bette.

  2. Yay! I’m so glad the prompt inspired you, Bette. A beautiful haiku and yes sometimes winter tromps in. 🙂 Spring is scurrying around on the horizon!

  3. We are all waiting and we just had the beast roar through yesterday and the day before. I’m so ready for some spring.

    Have a fabulous day and week, Bette. ♥

    • Thanks so much for stopping by for a visit, Sandee. We’re experiencing a heat wave at 34 degrees today–tiny taste of spring before another beast rolls in. ❤ Wishing you a fabulous day and week too! xo

      • That’s a heat wave. You made me laugh out loud. I guess after that really cold you had this is a blessing. We are having storm after storm here, but it’s not that cold. 🙂

  4. Although it is the middle of winter in my country, spring will come to me.
    Your haiku is beautiful, you are talented. I’m glad I met you.
    Best wishes

    • Thanks so much, Ultra. ❤ Winter woes will soon be a thing of the past and spring will come singing its sweet song… Blessings to you and yours.

  5. Love this, Bette!

  6. Thank you for sharing… lovely words… here on the path dreams don’t stop simply because of a little ole storm, especially when it was expected.. 🙂

    “Every morning your have two choices: continue to sleep with your dreams, or wake up and chase them.”

  7. D.L Finn, Author said:

    Yes they can disrupt dreams. Great Haiku.

  8. Mary-The Boondocks Blog said:

    What a great prompt for writing. The possibilities are endless with what you can write about.

  9. Lovely Haiku. Smiling at the image. Your words were perfect for it.
    Stay inspired. Have a beautiful week.

  10. animalistic
    haiku 🙂

  11. A perfect haiku for that photo, Bette. Winter has certainly been a beast the last few weeks!

  12. Bette, I love this!! 😀 This is wonderfully inspired, topical and fun! A great combination and joy to read. Hope that ‘Beast of a blizzard’ soon makes way for Spring! Xx

  13. Such a beautiful haiku..🤗🤗🤗

  14. A lovely Haiku Bette. Best of luck with your new publication.

  15. A lovely haiku, Bette! Spring is on its way – I hope! 🙂

  16. Bette, you wrote another beautiful haiku that corresponds so nicely to the image. >3

  17. A delightful haiku, Bette.

  18. Nice interpretation, Bette. Enjoyed it.

  19. This is perfect to go with Diana’s prompt, Bette. I love it!

  20. This is perfect to go with the prompt, Bette. I love it!

  21. Although i can not haiku my self I can appreciate a good one. Nicely done.

  22. I know how cold it can get in Maine, we were there once. What a joyous haiku to bring about the coming of spring. It’s nice, Bette! ❤

  23. Reblogged this on Myths of the Mirror and commented:
    From snowy Maine, a haiku from Bette. Enjoy.

  24. a great interpretation of the prompt!

  25. Lovely Haiku, Bette. Great take on the prompt. 😀 xo

  26. So nicely done!

  27. Bette, that is exquisite! What a marvelous response to the prompt. Great big hug! 🐘

    • Thanks so much for your sweet note, Teagan. The responses to Diana’s prompt have been so creative. I loved how you tied it in to your series. ❤ Hugs & Happy Weekend! xx

  28. One measure of how good a piece of writing is might be how annoyed I am that I didn’t write it. Case in point:

    I went to Diana’s site earlier this month and stared at the prompt for quite a while. I stared at it some more. I had nothing.

    Went back again. Still nothing. Grrr. I just couldn’t reconcile the surrealistic elements.

    And then you do it with such apparent ease here, and in such a way that OF COURSE this is what this image is about. There’s a beautiful inevitability in that feeling for me, as in how could that prompt be about anything else?

    Well done, Bette. Love the poem. 🙂

    • Thanks so much, Cathleen! ❤ The responses have been as unpredictable as the weather… All very creative. I've just finished formatting my first poetry book and needless to say I'm going crazy with all that still needs to be done. I'll be looking for ARC pre-release blurbs for "MY MAINE, Haiku through the Seasons" Let me know if you have an interest or know of anyone that might be interested.Have a fabulous week and enjoy what remains of the winter in your little corner of the world. xoxoxo

  29. Such a lovely poem, thank you..

  30. Totally know the feeling! Waiting for spring too, this weekend’s going to give us a little taste of it with temperatures rising over 10degrees Celsius. 😄 Love these prompts by Diana and reading what every one comes up with, your Haiku is a wonderful contribution, Bette! 😄❤

  31. A perfectly gorgeous response, Bette. Love it!

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